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So there's this Halo Role Playing site ive found somehow and im just "auditioning" my elite character and i cant finish it off tonight so im just gonna store it here for safe keeping and please tell me what u think if you can be bothered reading through all of it! :)

Name: Aya'Denee
Race: Elite
Age: Twenty - Seven
Height: ~Eight Feet
Weight: Three - Hundred Thirty Five Pounds

Appearance: Relatively slender for a Sangheili, and slightly over the average height of one.

Strengths: Proficient in the art of melee combat, Aya'Denee utilises his Active Camo, coupled with his Energy Sword, to deadly effect against his enemies. He is exceptional at sneaking behind enemy lines completely unnoticed, and taking out small groups of enemies and/or enemy leaders. He can be an extremely potent tactician when he has no other choice but generally doesn't lead.

Weaknesses: Aya'Denee is quite inaccurate with any form of ranged weapons due to his dedication to melee combat. Can be a tempting target for snipers when not employing Camo. He will only lead when it is utterly nessicary, he could not bare having to live with himself having sent his men to their deaths. Generally works, lives and kills alone.

Biography: Aya'Denee was brought up by Nelaan'Denee, a combat teacher at War College. His uncle taught him well in the arts of war, Aya angered his uncle with his dreams of healing the dying, of becoming a doctor. Aya wanted to heal, not kill, for he was born of a gentle soul, a gentle soul in a society of warriors and killers.

Aya was soon sent off to one of the greatest War Colleges in all of Sanghelios, his uncle wanted to "fix" him, rid him of his abnormality, his desire to heal. While at the War College, Aya was scorned and excluded by all the others, the Combat Masters had almost given up on him, when one day, during a melee training session, the Masters saw Aya break, he unleashed his rage and fury upon his collegue whom he was fighting against, and beat his half to death before the Masters restrained Aya. Aya was soon expelled, and Nelaan had another child, a new one. His own uncle had forgotten about him, given up on him, his own uncle regarded Aya as a failure and a dishonour to the Denee Clan. Aya was abandoned, homeless, and only 16.

As Aya stumbled through the Great Misty Forrest of Sanghelios, the final and only place he was not treated with hostility, he realised he had become an outcast of society, he was driven to survive, to prove himself to his Clan, and to take vengance upon his father. At age 18, after two whole years of living alone, he was found by Ultra Thetna Leyak'mee and his followers, they were on a recruitment mission sent to Sanghelios to find and train Special Ops Sangheili. Motivated by his lust for revenge, Aya trained hard and well with these Sangheili Warriors, who adopted him as a trainee. They soon realised that Aya had extreme patience, perfect for training as a Stealth Sangheili.

This was his perfect chance for redemption, to directly serve the great Prophets, and finally be accepted back into his clan. He trained hard for years, and soon he was finally emitted to the ranks of the Stealth Sangheili, the Prophets' own force of deadly spies and assassins. During his initiation ceremony, Aya was given his Stealth armour and his weapon of choice, the Energy Sword.

Aya followed the command of Ultra Serna 'Kanee The Honoured. Serna soon realised Aya's melee capabilities, and they both won many great victories fighting side-by-side. Aya was soon allowed command of his own small force, and to test his commanding abilities, ws sent on a test-mission, to "clean up" the planet Harvest before its final destruction, sabotauge comms, destroy the leaders, and leave the rest to the foot soldiers. With that mission quickly and efficiently completed, Aya reported back to Serna. They were tasked with scouting out human colonies, years they spent, operating as one of the Covenant's scouting forces.

After five years of searching out human colonies, assassinating leaders, and blowing up comm towers, they reported back to the Imperial Admril at the head of the main Covenant forces, who sent him on an all-important mission, to lead the invasion fleet and recapture Harvest, which the humans have recaptured over the last few years.



NPCs:

Thel Nkeyan'ee
Rank: Stealth
Thel is quite the opposite from Aya, Thel is an extrordinary sniper, yet lacks the right kind of brutality to be effective at close quarters. Thel can usually be found carrying his trusty Carbine, and a Plasma Pistol.

Lann 'Kantee
Rank: Stealth
Lann hates the Jiralhanae. Alot. He will refuse to work with them at all. This has started trouble between him an the Jiralhanae, a few punch ups and brawls here and there. Due to one of these fights, he has a scar across his face, making his useless at sniping effectively. Lann is experienced at non-weapons fighting, and dislikes using weapons. Lann usually carries his Plasma Rifle, and a brutal alien sword he found on one of his past missions, along with his favourite grenade, the Plasma Grenade.


RP Sample: The wounded human soldier limped along the pathway supported at the shoulder by his comrad. These were the only survivors of Aya's attempt to destroy the snipers hidden within the ruins. Aya followed them, completely unseen, utterly silent. These humans deserved to die, they had no honour, instead of fighting they chose to hang back and take shots at us from afar. The cowards. Worthless cowards that's all they are. Nevertheless, they would give away our position if they made it back to their forward base. They had to be dealt with, and Aya was the one, personally chosen to do it. He just had to wait for the best moment to act. The low shrubs on either side of the path soon turned to large trees as they continued down the path. The large trees soon became a dense jungle. The time was near. Soon the path would become overgrown. The humans would have to leave the pathway, and they are noisy and clumsy. Aya rushed ahead and stopped at the ideal location when she eventually found it. She waited, with patience, like she had done so many times before.

The humans stumbled through the dense undergrowth. Now was the time. Aya lunged at the marines, cutting at their legs. Their feet were severed from their legs. They opened their mouths to scream in agony but their heads had already fallen from their necks before they had a chance to. The headless, footless bodies collapsed on the ground in a dead heap. Quick. Silent. Efficient. That was what made Aya one of the greatest assassins the Prophet had at his disposal, or so he thought.

Aya opened the comms-device. "The snipers are dead. No human remains that knows of our position. The time is now" Ultra 'Kanee Replied "Already? That was quick. Okay, MOVE OUT". So far, the plan was working. Would we finally drive the human disgrace from this planet?

Aya followed the plan presicely, quickly moving along the cleared path to find the human base. Finally, there it was. A patheticly flimsy-looking encampment, obviously the marines were too preoccupioed with merely suviving to care enough to make the base anything more then a temporary shelter for the troops. Only a wall of logs protected them. There wasn't anything in the way of a comms tower. That meant one of two things, either the main base was near-by, or they were completely alone, out of range of any comms tower. Aya signalled Thel to ready his Carbine, and for Lann to create a distraction.

Lann threw a Plasma Grenade at the closest log-pile. It exploded in a haze of blue plasma, the force of it sent a log crashing into a tent, and trapping an unfortunate marine by his now-crushed leg. At the precise moment of the explosion, Thel decided to shoot at the commanding officer, the one with the most badges. As the radioactive projectile hit the officer, square between the eyes, and with a spirt of blood, the officer fell back, blood drooling from the 8mm hole in his head.

The marines barely had time to notice what was going on when Lann charged at them, Plasma Rifle blazing, rapidly firing blue shots of Plasma energy towards anything that moved, mainly the Marines. A few marines fell dead while their comrads rushed around them screaming "THEY'RE ATTACKING!!!" and loading their primitive guns. One brave marine tried to buy time for his collegues to escape, he charged at Lann, smacking him on the chest with his gun. Lann barely felt a thing, his armour absorbed the hit completely, and he smashed the marine across the face with his great fist. The marines red blood flew through the air as he crashed to the ground, not dead, but greatly wounded.

Lann left the marine to duck for cover as a hundred bullets flew through the air towards him. They all missed their mark, flying straight past. The hail of bullets soon ceased as the humans realised that Lann was no longer standing in their sight. "He must be somewhere." reported a young and plainly inexperienced marine. Suddenly, another radioactive-green projectile flew out of Thel's Carbine, and into the head of another marine.

They stopped, and turned around, looking vainly for the concealed sniper. Lann seized his moment, and silently snuck up behind the desperate marines, drew his brutal knife. The knife was yet to taste blood. Lann thrust the knife through a marines chest, and as he screamed in agony, his comrad standing next to him collapsed, the unmistakeable plasma-blue, two pronged blade of an Energy Sword through his chest. It was Aya.

"Quick, Lann, we must get out of the radius of my bombs I just planted". As they ran away from the base, Aya signalled Thel to stay where he was. There was a massive explosion of blue plasma, the light consuming the entire of the humans' Forward Base. Serna finally arrived with the rest of the force. "Serna, there is a good chance that the humans' main base on this planet is nearby, but it will be well guarded, I can assure that." Serna replied "Of course. I just hope you made that battle quick, if they can alert the other humans then we will soon be having to evacuate this planet ourselves, or call for reinforcements. The Prophets will not like wasting their time on this little human colony though."

Thank you pplz now i shall leave to DINE IN HELL i mean have dinner...